New Original Song "Kellyanne"

Periwinkle · 01-14-2008, 06:42 PM

i got bored and put this song together really quickly after watching the season finale of The Real World Sydney... I didn't feel like photo shopping anything after just writing the song so i just copy pasted pictures: Tell me what you think...

Intro (solo)

hey there kellyanne; ever stop to think what could've been?
6 months so premature; and our paths changing oh so soon.
another life; another world. things would be better and we'd be together.
but i thank you for your time; and hand back your wings so you can fly away.

i jumped in with my eyes closed, but now they're open, now they're open.
i jumped in with my eyes closed, but now they're open, now they're open.

we both open up our hearts; hoping to find another fish in the sea.
and if we ever meet again; MAYBE we can swim upstream together again.

i jumped in with my eyes closed, but now they're open, now they're open.
i jumped in with my eyes closed, but now they're open, now they're open.

hey there kellyanne; ever stop to think what could've been?

Outro (solo)

McCloude · 01-14-2008, 06:56 PM

Dude.. That's really good.

Skozat · 01-14-2008, 08:01 PM

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Originally Posted by McCloude

Dude.. That's really good.

Agreed, though pity that the real world was your inspiration

Showtime · 01-14-2008, 08:21 PM

If that is your voice then great job =] Real World = lame but at least out of how many ever seasons---FINALLY! something good came of them

Ashra · 01-14-2008, 09:06 PM

that was really good! grats

Zinmasterb · 01-14-2008, 10:36 PM

1:31 looks like her boob is poppin out! woO!
anyways what exactly prompted this song? anything significant happen this time around on real world?

Periwinkle · 01-14-2008, 11:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zinmasterb

1:31 looks like her boob is poppin out! woO!
anyways what exactly prompted this song? anything significant happen this time around on real world?

i didn't actually right this about kellyanne from real world, but it ended up fitting perfectly. The song is actually about my ex-girlfriend i just disguised the name so she didn't think it was about her pretty much, but this is what came into my head after about 6 months of time between we broke up. I don't have any feelings for her anymore, but what it suggests is that when i went into the relationship i shoulda realized it would end up no where; all the answers were in front of me, but i just couldn't see them. So now my eyes are open; and when i do find another lady friend i will jump in, but with my eyes open. Something like that. I hope you enjoy the solo's and the chords because i had fun messing around with them and making them work well together.

Venom714 · 01-14-2008, 11:54 PM

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Originally Posted by Periwinkle

i didn't actually right this about kellyanne from real world, but it ended up fitting perfectly. The song is actually about my ex-girlfriend i just disguised the name so she didn't think it was about her pretty much, but this is what came into my head after about 6 months of time between we broke up. I don't have any feelings for her anymore, but what it suggests is that when i went into the relationship i shoulda realized it would end up no where; all the answers were in front of me, but i just couldn't see them. So now my eyes are open; and when i do find another lady friend i will jump in, but with my eyes open. Something like that. I hope you enjoy the solo's and the chords because i had fun messing around with them and making them work well together.

well said man. been there done that.

i still have feelings for my Y (i don't have any ex's, i only have Y's... why the HELL did i get with that!? :] ) tho a lil bit... probably always will. everybody warned me about her though, and that us being together owuld only end badly. and i suppose i knew it would, but i didn't want to admit it.

ohhh welll... im with an awesome girl now so <^> to the Y.

Mordim · 01-14-2008, 11:56 PM

Very nice bro, do you only do acoustic? and if not would love to hear some other stuff no matter what it's played on.

props man well done

Lethos · 01-15-2008, 11:17 AM

Another really good track mate - and yes we all still want free concert tickets when you go big time

I would love to hear a non acoustical version of that song, do you mainly do acoustic or dabble a little?

01-14-2008, 06:42 PM	#1 (permalink)
Periwinkle Guild Cook/Troubadour Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 265	New Original Song "Kellyanne" i got bored and put this song together really quickly after watching the season finale of The Real World Sydney... I didn't feel like photo shopping anything after just writing the song so i just copy pasted pictures: Tell me what you think... Intro (solo) hey there kellyanne; ever stop to think what could've been? 6 months so premature; and our paths changing oh so soon. another life; another world. things would be better and we'd be together. but i thank you for your time; and hand back your wings so you can fly away. i jumped in with my eyes closed, but now they're open, now they're open. i jumped in with my eyes closed, but now they're open, now they're open. we both open up our hearts; hoping to find another fish in the sea. and if we ever meet again; MAYBE we can swim upstream together again. i jumped in with my eyes closed, but now they're open, now they're open. i jumped in with my eyes closed, but now they're open, now they're open. hey there kellyanne; ever stop to think what could've been? Outro (solo) __________________

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McCloude Super Moderator Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Maryland Posts: 1,189	Dude.. That's really good. __________________ Disce Pati

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Showtime Way better than HBO Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: California (So-Cal) Posts: 2,177	If that is your voice then great job =] Real World = lame but at least out of how many ever seasons---FINALLY! something good came of them __________________ Want a signature like mine? PM me

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Mordim ~Offical Ninja~ Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Quincy, Illinois Posts: 168	Very nice bro, do you only do acoustic? and if not would love to hear some other stuff no matter what it's played on. props man well done __________________ -Mordim "I thoroughly disapprove of duels. If a man should challenge me, I would take him kindly and forgivingly by the hand and lead him to a quiet place and kill him." -Mark Twain

01-15-2008, 11:17 AM	#10 (permalink)
Lethos Always write in complete sentences. Always. Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Vancouver, B.C. Posts: 901	Another really good track mate - and yes we all still want free concert tickets when you go big time I would love to hear a non acoustical version of that song, do you mainly do acoustic or dabble a little?

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